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Part 1 here: [link]
Part 3 here: [link]

Hmm, yea this was supposed to have been finished about.....6 months ago. WELL NOW PART 2 IS OUT HOOYA!
I'd like to see this finished regardless if anyone really likes it. I need to break that freaking habit of starting things and never finishing. >>
Anyways, now that I look at 6 months time, eeeeeh yea, you can tell when I stopped and restarted kinda. I like the first and last page the most out of this batch, I think its the heartless and how pathethic Zexion looks. The boy/guy is just too damn pretty. And for some reason on the last page, Marluxia doesn't really LOOK like Marluxia. I like Axel's puppets, they make me laugh for some reason.
I think this part suffers sequel syndrome, you know where is seems it not really as good as the first one.
Dunno when part 3 is coming out as I draw it when I feel like it, I am also considering adding in the other Organization members as enough time has elapsed so that they can be included without fear of spoiling anything so to speak.
S/N: Visual critiques only on the last page, as it is the most recent, any suggestions on the months older pages would seem repetitive.
Comic/gags drawn by me; ~blank-death
The "Axel is a human mooba" thing was done by someone else first :XD:

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:iconluciferownsme:
O.o I'm not entirely sure what happened... but the pictures are still fun to look at...

I fail at advanced critique...

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:iconblank-death:
If you are confused, I have succeeded!

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:iconluciferownsme:
O.O oh, okay...

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Logic fails me; hence I draw comics!

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:iconkakashi101:
Way too funny! I love your COM DJ!!!

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:iconblank-death:
Have you read the first part? It might clear up some of the confusion. But then again it is a fancomic created on a whim....

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"I'm not violent, you're just annoying." :XD:
:iconluciferownsme:
I think I'll go read part one again, I think I forgot most of it

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Logic fails me; hence I draw comics!

Forgive me, I'm lousy at critiquing...
:iconcjade:
Hahaha, poor Zexion. XD
:iconwaterdancer:
hahahahahahahah great... XD

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holy MOISTURIZER, this is good. lol. mooooisssssturiiiiizerrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!

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HE'S GOT THE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRG GGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEE!!! ^_^

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